Living on a shoestring By Nyree Tompkins

BY Levi F

my story review-Giving it a shot,by David Tulloch.

This story is about a girl named Lauren thinking that her family are all winners because it sees on the shirts and it’s about her running

but she comes third place because she didn't try. But her dad thinks that she should do more sports and go to the gym more often and she would won.

This story takes place at her School, School Courts, At Her Room, and her House. The characters in this story are Mum, Dad, Lauren, Other Students, Other Racers, and Nina. I liked this story because her dad encourages his daughter to get more thin like the other girls at her school. I also liked this story because she doesn't care.

BY Levi.F