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Wednesday 31 August 2016

Auckland Council - Persuasive Writing

The Auckland council needs sirens at train stations and making sure the security guards are watching the sirens at all times. So when the train comes, the sirens play a loud warning sound that will warn people to stop people from walking over the crossing.

Auckland council should also upgrade the brakes on the trains so they slow down much quicker.The also need much louder trains so that the people can hear the trains coming,and stop walking across the track.

Also,the people should stay away from the train when it comes to the station because they could fall in front of the train by accident,or the wind could make the people fall into the train and get crushed.

1 comment:

Danni Stone said...

Hi Levi, you have had some great ideas and given good advice to people about catching trains. I like your points: people need to be careful around trains and Auckland Transport should be doing everything they can to keep people safe.

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